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condemnable sins

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lust
raging red fires swell with wild
desires; uncontrollable
"love" hiding carnal passion
under a panacea
of sensuality and
cowardice. (not lecherous
salacity until you
signify the sin by name.)  

avarice
incantations of excess,
niggardliness and wistful,
deepest yearning sovereign.
pining, ravenous spirits,
desperate, vilest of beasts--
covetous rapacity.

wrath
devils strike our suffering
young hearts with ferocious
cruelty. (we fall, broken,
our dark secrets glossed over.)
minds on fire; revenge has no
language. calculated
coldness disappears, ruthless
venom reigns omnipotent.
(brutality has no name
but lupine maliciousness)

gluttony
egoistic overwhelm the
benevolent; narcissistic
humanity is only
obsessed with the self-centered
souls.  (let's eat McDonald's with
celebrities while thousands
of children starve in the slums
of factual Africa--
the state of the galaxy.)

sloth
fainéant sluggards often
sleep apathetically,
secreting emotions and
importance; unswervingly
otiose. (lethargy winks
at the slave who kisses her
slumberously poignant feet.)

envy
jealousy: a frightening
trait, one friend lusts and hearts break,
revealing secrets no man
should know, and stealing what ought
not to be owned. (by only
the licentious sinners
of furfuraceous and hard,
calloused, and partisan hearts.)

pride  
wild lions devour stone souls
cloaked in devilish closets
and under the sofas of
the dead, flaws are swept under
the carpet: let them rust, and
seize you at the height of Cloud
Nine. (hubris is not only
for the Greeks, seventh heaven
is not an achievable
state of consciousness with you. )
well, this took me several days to write.(which is why I haven't been very active, oh well)  it was a lot of fun researching the different sins, (if you don't know what the 7 Deadly Sins are, click this:en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_de… but I swear, trying to find words other than "greed, selfish, hate," etc. made thesaurus.com my new best friend. :XD: 

( hey! guess what you can find if you look at the syllable count in each line? *wink wink*

PROMPT: (try it for yourself!) my friend challenged me to write a poem about one (I chose all, ha!) of the 7 Deadly Sins. And if you look closely, you'll see a requirement in each of the lines...

and who knew " niggardliness" was a word? 

enjoy! :boogie:

-Waffles
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